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Old 07-23-2004, 18:06   #1 (permalink)
Chip off the Ol'Proc
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So, what do you think of; http://www.1GoodReason.com
All criticisms welcome, except those relating to my heritage, my mother,
and the attributes of various parts of my anatomy...
Thanks, and have a great weekend...
Chip
 
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Old 07-23-2004, 19:09   #2 (permalink)
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Chip off the Ol'Proc wrote:

> So, what do you think of; http://www.1GoodReason.com
> All criticisms welcome, except those relating to my heritage, my mother,
> and the attributes of various parts of my anatomy...
> Thanks, and have a great weekend...
> Chip



Where do I start?
Where can I get me one o' them there Gold Web Award doohickies?
))))

....a-and, try entering it's address at
http://validator.w3.org
It's not XHTML 1.0 transitional as claimed, for 47 reasons.
It'd be hard to get started on a critique until it's cleaned up.
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Old 07-23-2004, 19:09   #3 (permalink)
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m wrote:
> ...
> Where can I get me one o' them there Gold Web Award doohickies?


http://www.doohickeys.co.uk/ seems like a reasonable place to start.

Sam: pay attention (look up - no, further up)

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Old 07-23-2004, 20:05   #4 (permalink)
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William Tasso wrote:

> m wrote:
>> ...
>> Where can I get me one o' them there Gold Web Award doohickies?

>
> http://www.doohickeys.co.uk/ seems like a reasonable place to start.


Sweet. Hope they deliver up in the hills.
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Old 07-24-2004, 00:02   #5 (permalink)
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"Chip off the Ol'Proc" <covertchris@SPAMSSUXbigfoot.com> wrote
> So, what do you think of; http://www.1GoodReason.com
> All criticisms welcome, except those relating to my heritage, my mother,
> and the attributes of various parts of my anatomy...
> Thanks, and have a great weekend...



its good. I would break the Instant Website Analysis into 2 seperate forms.

1 at the start with the automated response,
the 2nd "fill in your details" part after the sample screen shots.

that way more people will interact with the form rather than be suss of getting spammed.
Use some icon of a computer wizard or some such to say its user friendly.

Also the top is bland, a small company icon would fix that. a splash more color,
maybe dull red on the form to match the brickwork instead of grey, there's a lot of grey.

Herc



 
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Old 07-28-2004, 00:42   #6 (permalink)
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"William Tasso" <SpamBlocked@tbdata.com> wrote in message
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> m wrote:
> > ...
> > Where can I get me one o' them there Gold Web Award doohickies?

>
> http://www.doohickeys.co.uk/ seems like a reasonable place to start.
>
> Sam: pay attention (look up - no, further up)


Many thanks :-)
Your cheque is in the post......

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Old 07-28-2004, 00:42   #7 (permalink)
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"Chip off the Ol'Proc" <covertchris@SPAMSSUXbigfoot.com> wrote in message
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> So, what do you think of; http://www.1GoodReason.com
> All criticisms welcome, except those relating to my heritage, my mother,
> and the attributes of various parts of my anatomy...
> Thanks, and have a great weekend...
> Chip


Blahhhhhhh.

Does not have a professional look. Too much gobbliegook on the one page. Use
of graphics is poor.

Back to the drawing board mate.

Pass the dip Chip

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