Lori wrote:
> I'm looking for some feedback yet again. My blog is finished and up to
> date: http://ontgovernment.blogspot.com/
>
> Comments on how to improve it would be appreciated. Don't worry about
> hurting my feelings this time.
>
> Thanks in advance,
A bit of information design wouldn't go amiss.
I think you'd actually get a lot of support from people if you put your
core issues up-front, and be a little more agitprop in your style.
A hard-hitting introductory statement about employers invading the
privacy of it's employees might make people want to read it a bit more.
The fact that its local government going against your own countries bill
of rights just adds fuel to the fire.
Whilst your blog chronicles your personal struggle, there are (near)
universal themes, and a much bigger picture: the oppressed worker, the
liberties taken by so-called managers (who have probably had no
training), the dangers of information technology to breach privacy.
These things are hooks that other disgruntled employees might respond to.
Also, reverse date order. I want to see the latest post at the top, and
scroll down to see the history, not the other way around!
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Davémon
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