Once upon a time, far far away, the king summoned "alandem"
<alandem@ntlworld.com> who replied:
>Hi,
>I am just setting up my first ecommerce website. Please can you guys take a
>peek and let me know your thoughts. Please note I am not a qualified web
>designer so be gentle!
>
>URL: http://americansweets.co.uk/index.htm
>
>Thanks.
>Regards,
>AL
Oh dear, where to begin?
How about this: "Welcome to the homepage for the Stateside Candy Co,
Distributors of American Candy products in the UK" which is simply too
long, try "Stateside Candy Co, Distributors of American Candy products
in the UK" instead.
The home page is far too wide, it scrolls even in a maximised 1024
width window!
You have neglected to declare a background colour? So parts of the
display appear (to me) grey, which just looks awful.
I always feel "PayPal" to appear unprofessional, I'd rather see a
proper merchant account.
Your "Search" facility is very obviously unfinished.
Matt
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